This week's Friday Feature, come from Cathleen Dunn. Her book Chimera debuted last November and has received an all around 5 star rating.
Author
Cathleen Dunn has lived in Seattle for the last 20 years after growing up all
over the United States. She's lived in Texas, California, Kansas, Colorado,
Nevada, Oregon, Arizona, and truly likes variety: she attended college both in
Washington and Arizona, has a day job at an engineering company, loves rescuing
greyhounds, has been onstage with Seattle Opera, and has been known to paint
faux finishes and murals inside homes for her friends. She also goes hunting
and fishing with her husband occasionally, watches way too many old movies and
educational television, and listens to both Baroque and Metal music.
Cathleen
is the author of The Witches Trilogy series of full-length novels. She published
the first installment, Chimera, in November of 2013 and is
currently writing the second novel, Blue/Black, set for release in December
2014. She sets her stories here in Seattle, where the dark and rain create the
witches' stories in her head. She just writes them down.
Cathleen not only is here to promote her series, but to delve into her writing process. Welcome Cathleen Dunn!
I've gotten so many questions about my writing process that I thought I
should answer those for you. I've been really busy on book #2 in the Witches Trilogy
- Blue/Black - but to be honest, I'm half way through and just need a BREAK.
Funny how taking a break translates into more writing, but it's different
when I’m talking to all of you. As for the questions about how in the world I
go from idea to published novel, here you are. Enjoy!
1) How does your
writing process work?
At first there's a lot of living inside my head – you know, the stuff that everyone does when they think about writing a book. Coming up with ideas, visualizing scenes, deciding on names and such, and those cool ideas that wake you up in the middle of the night. For those middle of the night ones, I be sure and write down right then because I won't remember them in the morning. After about a month I take those notes and everything I have inside my head and just start typing it all into a Word document as fast as I can. I don't worry about what order it's in – I just set the doc to bullet points and type in everything from my notes and what's in my head. Separate thoughts, scenes or ideas all each get their own bullet. I usually end up with 10-12 pages of bullet points.
Then I arrange those
in the order in which they should happen in the story. If there's a gap in the
story line I'll stick a bullet point with XXXXXXXX's in there and keep on
putting the rest in order. After that's done I should have the outline of
my story, and I read it through as fast as I can (ignoring typos and
idea-generating) to see how it flows, and to see if there's any little tricks,
questions, logic gaps, magical 'fails' or any other fails that I need to fix
until I have a solid storyline that makes sense, is exciting, has a good arc
and tension in it, and no gaps in logic or any other ‘escapements’.
When that's done, I
take those bullet points and start typing the whole story bullet by bullet,
expanding each bullet until it's completely fleshed out and I'm ready to go to
the next bullet point and fill it in. I read and reread each section as I go
along to gauge content, flow, errors, better word usage, delete repetitive
fragments, etc… Then I delete the bullet notes I just finished and go on to the
next one until I've done them all.
After that, I read the
manuscript through completely to see if it's awkward or cheesy anywhere and fix
those sections. THEN I put it away for a few months while I work on my
next project or take a break so that I can get some distance away from my story
and come back a few months later and read it through with a fresh eye. THAT'S
where I catch some errors or passages that I was in love with when I wrote them
but look stupid by light of day. You know, kind of like that person you
saw at the party when you were drunk and just loved, who looks far different in
the daytime after you’re sober. After all, that's how a new reader would come
into a book, not already dazed and in love with it, right? I need that
distance to really look objectively at my work.
At that point I cut,
add, polish, and recraft the story until it's done and then send it to my group
of Beta readers with a questionnaire to fill out after they're done. That way I
can get some stats on how many people had the same problem with it or the same perception.
At that point it's up to me whether or not I will make the changes.
After that, I send it
to a professional copy editor and incorporate their edits – getting another
professional, unbiased view is essential for a novel.
Then… I send it to
several proofreaders to make sure there are no typos, gaps, hanging sentences, or
anything else.
And finally, I have a
professional format and upload it for printing – they will catch any formatting
and other errors that anyone else has missed along the way. I want the
final product to be as smooth and error-free for my readers, so you can see all
these professional additional looks at the manuscript are essential.
2) What am I currently working on?
Right now I'm in the
middle of writing The Witches Trilogy, which follows an international
coterie of witches with a wealthy and lavish lifestyle - and of course,
supernatural dangers like demonic possession and a power struggle that pits
vicious dark witches against the light ones. Since the light witches aren't
supposed to harm with their magic, it takes some serious trickery and
mind-games to overcome their dark counterparts. Additionally, what if a witch
has both dark and light in them? Whose side are they on? And how do we know?
There's a few humans who get mixed up in this as well - and end up on the wrong
side of magic.
The overarching story
includes TWT: Chimera, where Dantin - a very dark witch with a deeply
psychotic crush on Olivia, one of the light witches, stalks and torments her
because she doesn't love him back, but she can't use her powers to get rid of
him. After he's killed her lover and apprentice, she can't take it anymore and
might have to give up everything she loves to save everyone she loves. And not
everyone gets out of Chimera alive. In
book #2 TWT: Blue/Black, one of the light witches is
turning dark – and another named Malila is trying to help her, but is Malila
dark or is she light? Maybe she's not as evil as she appears, but there's no
way to know which side of her will prevail. In the third and final book,
tentatively titled TWT: Step, some forgotten villains find a way to take
revenge on the witches with some help from a human.
The first installment
is called The Witches Trilogy: Chimera, the second is The Witches
Trilogy: Blue/Black, and as for the final title to The Witches
Trilogy: Book #3, I'm going to let my readers decide what it will be
called. Right now the working title is The Witches Trilogy: Step, but in
January 2015 I'll put up a few more titles on my website and let people vote
their choice at http://cathleendunn.com/
Last year I had the
readers vote on which cover art I should use and they selected the beautiful
liquid covers you see here by a 75% majority. It was so much fun for everybody
to have their say in the cover art!
3) How does my work differ from others of its genre?
My witches have
familiars called chimera (like guy-mere-uh) that are spirits who live in the
realm of magic. But they're not all good – some chimera are perfidious, cruel,
power-hungry, and can possess and enslave a witch if they can find their way
in. They will use a witch to experience all the carnal pleasures and sensations
of a human body. Another kind will protect a witch while they're
tapping into all that power out there, and help them enhance their powers - if
they follow the rules.
And then there's the
glitz! These witches are rich – I mean like Beyonce/Jay-Z rich, and they
jet to all the chi-chi places around the world and live lavish lives. Everyone
I talk to when writing these books tells me "Yeah, make them wealthy – if I
had powers like that I'd live a rock-star life! Why do other stories make
witches and wizards live such ordinary lives?"
4) Why do I write what
I do?
I love describing the
magic, whether it's something beautiful, or decrepit and hideous. Fantasy
allows me to tell how it feels to have magical power rush through you make up
anything and what it looks like or. I also like the discipline of putting the
magical world so close to the real world, where nobody knows these witches
exist, and making it believable. And of course writing how it feels to be
pampered and cosseted and fly in a private jet and go to all these wonderful
places that they do is so fabulous and enjoyable to write.
I want to make
readers feel they're the ones that are doing the magic, or that they've been in
the private jet, or been to Paris and Seattle and Monte Carlo and Dubai, and
stayed in the most luxurious suites, and actually attended red-carpet events
and lavish parties. I'd like them to experience having a private fitting of a
designers new line tailored just to them in one of Paris's finest haute
couture salons. But of course there's always a price for the luxury –
nothing is ever given for free.
5) You have a full-time job; when do you find time to write?
Some people can
write a couple hours every day, but I can't switch from my day job where I have
to be logical and sensible to my fantasy world very easily, so I write on
Saturday and Sunday, and maybe an occasional Friday or Monday for ten to thirteen
hours a day. I just stay in my world and write a bunch of pages and then go
back to work during the week. My characters are never far away though; I think
about them constantly and formulate the next weekend's work with my right brain
while I'm using my left brain at my day job.
6) Where do you get your ideas?
Ever since I was little I loved superstition and ghost stories
and magic. I remember getting a book of superstitions from the library and
thinking about them all the way to school when I was in first grade. Things
like: "If you see the full moon through the trees it is considered bad
luck", or "if you walk through a spot of cold air, you have just
walked through a ghost", or "never let a broom touch your head; it is
bad luck". I also see stories in music; the feeling a particular song
gives me might start a story there. For example, my niece gave me a CD by
"Evanescence" - their "Fallen" album - and while listening
to it I started to see Olivia and her problems, and how she was feeling about
being hounded and isolated by what had happened in her past. Interestingly
enough, her decision on how to handle Dantin came off a
"Transformers" album. Go figure.
7) What kind of music do you listen to?
Almost anything, but I
especially love harpsichord concertos from the Baroque era, and rock. Some of
my favorite bands are Avenged Sevenfold, Disturbed, Godhead, Nickelback,
Rammstein, AC/DC, a little Alice Cooper, Evanescence, and almost anything from
the Eighties. I also love big band - Glen Miller, Tommy Dorsey, the Andrews
Sisters, almost anything from the Thirties and Forties.
Anything else?
A huge THANK YOU
to everyone who comes to see me, or to my blog or my FB, and of course, to
everyone who has bought my book and tells me how much they enjoyed living the
magical and wealthy life with Olivia, Alejo, Taylor, JaneAnn, and all the other
witches in these stories. I will keep them coming for you!
Here's what they say about her work:
" ...extraordinary debut novel...move over Stephenie Meyer, there's a new girl in town!" -Reader, Ann S.
"Just when you think you've seen everything, something new comes along, and Cathleen Dunn has certainly brought that! Chimera creates an unusual world of magic... Do not miss it."-Lee Witt, author of Become Unstoppable
Enjoy the following excerpt from book of The Witches Trilogy: Chimera
Olivia touched the petals of the
iris in the outdoor market. So fragile – and beautiful. Their plum color faded
to violet, then pale lavender at the very tips. These would be wonderful in the
dining room on the old table, the only thing she had taken from the plantation
house when it had burned over a century ago. She’d even posed her own death in
the fire and had left the house to herself under another name…but she had never
rebuilt. The charred bits were still there, overgrown and anonymous. She
stuffed the thought, pushing away the feelings that came with it. She lived in
Seattle now, not Louisiana.
She was paying for the flowers
when she felt a tightness on the back of her legs, a tingling feeling that
moved up her spine and made her scalp prickle with a rush of adrenaline.
Another witch was close by and could be a strong one, but the feeling was not
at all disciplined – usually a dangerous sign.
She looked around, careful not to
focus anywhere. Don’t think about it, just feel. There was a pair of Northwesters
in fleece, several well-groomed couples in jeans and button-down shirts, a
well-dressed young professional… Olivia didn’t sense anything from them. Who
is it? Why can’t I tell? An older couple browsed in the kiosk next to her.
Ah! The gooseflesh still – could this be them? No… then a ratty group passed
her, probably runaways, and she felt the tightness even more strongly down her
thighs. It was one of them – a girl with dark brown hair and green eyes. The
girl stepped around Olivia trailing a haze of magic, but nothing definite, no
structure, no training. As a test, Olivia looked hard at the girl and directed
a thought toward her: Turn around – look at me. No change. She
doesn’t know; she has no idea. The brunette was now on the sidewalk with
her group, who were laughing. The girl smiled languidly, not interacting.
Classic born to the caul witch, Olivia thought. Always feeling a little
separate from everyone else. She was positive; either this girl had no idea
about her abilities, or she was unaware how to use them and of the hazards that
came with the power.
She browsed her way down the
street, following unnoticed as the girl and her friends went into Ruby’s Diner,
a well-worn place that served strong coffee and large platters of greasy,
old-fashioned breakfast. The food was so cheap and voluminous it was a favorite
hangout in the Broadway district, especially for runaways.
There were so many runaways here
on Capitol Hill, finding awkward acceptance amongst the residents. Some in the
neighborhood had even pulled together to create the Home Alive program after
punk singer Mia Zapata had been murdered there in 1993. Mia hadn’t been
homeless, but like the street kids she had been out at two a.m. one morning and
had ended up dead only minutes after her last contact with anyone. Olivia gave
thousands to Home Alive even now. Still, that was just money, easy enough to
donate. It was a whole different level of intimacy to take on an apprentice…
Goddammit. The last thing she wanted was an apprentice, but she didn’t
want this uncontrolled element in her neighborhood, either. She didn’t know
anything about this girl and realized she would need to and very soon – before
someone or something else got to her.
A few nights later Olivia sat
atop the stone wall that edged the community pool and listened to its waterfall
as she watched Taylor with her companions. She leaned back to look at the
moonlight on her burgundy leather pants. Clouds intermittently trapped the glow
in shadow, then released it again to paint a sheen on everything. The bluish
haze and the dark sapped vibrancy from colors and made it the perfect setting
to be invisible. Olivia loved being invisible and did it often. She could
observe in solitude while people around acted without presumption. Being
invisible also meant that people could pass through her, which was always
revealing: for a moment they blended and Olivia could feel their memories,
hopes, emotions, loneliness… A passing couple walked through her legs and gave
Olivia a rush of their anticipation and sexual energy. Feeling their emotions
was deeply personal, and she mentally looked away as they passed through but
smiled at experiencing their mutual crush on each other.
Now she watched Taylor and her
friends at the end of the Ave while they in turn watched a pair of feral cats
hunting in the alley behind a restaurant. Occasionally the scruffy malkins
stood immobile to bluff something living that came their way—other times
quickly gulping down anything vile they found. Scraps or wildlife, either was
fine when not much was around. They came out to where Taylor and company were
standing, and one tried to lure the cats with kissing sounds and calls of
“kitty, kitty, kitty.” Olivia laughed at that – why would an alley cat know the
word “kitty”? The brown cat left immediately, crouching backward under a hedge
and could be heard brushing its way off through the leaves. The other stood his
ground and hissed, baring very long, sharp teeth. Then he turned glowering and
strode into the bushes, tail straight up except for a kink at the very tip.
After a minute more of talking Taylor and her friends turned and made off down
the sidewalk. As Olivia crossed the street after them she saw both cats come
out of hiding. Apparently one of them had snagged a treasure in the hedge – a
pliable, drooping mouse was tucked into kinktail’s furry mouth. They trotted
down the alley together, the brown cat trying to get her face close for a bite
of the mouse and the other turning his face away right and then left, keeping
it just out of reach. She smiled, watching as the duo zigzagged down the alley,
then followed Taylor’s group receding down the sidewalk.
Several blocks later, Taylor
split off from her friends onto a side street. It was thickly dark here, away
from the streetlights on the Ave. Olivia was surprised to see the girl leave
her group. Typically runaways sought the security of friends in the darkness
when they were most vulnerable – helpless and sleeping. As they continued
further Olivia alerted to a feeling of maliciousness. She saw a man in a
hoodie, his hands in his sagging front pocket and his headpiece pulled down
with his face in shadow, watching Taylor from a side street. The girl couldn’t
see him standing next to a narrow juniper until she was a few yards away. He
stepped out onto the sidewalk and walked toward her, passing innocuously as if
uninterested, then turned once Taylor’s back was to him. As he moved toward her
she turned and stared at him, her face expressionless except for baleful eyes.
Stone cold still she stood and the man stopped, apparently unsure now of his
intended prey. Taylor’s expression didn’t change as the hooded stranger took
another step toward her and Olivia heard the distinct message emanating from
her: “Don’t.” She watched the standoff, feeling intensity and anticipation.
Both stood frozen, Taylor’s emotionless gaze fixed on him the whole time, and
after three or four seconds the would-be assailant turned away. Olivia could
tell the girl was not at all intimidated as she stared after the retreating
figure before pivoting and continuing on her way. She never looked back. Good,
Olivia thought. She’ll need to be tough. But which blood-tint did she have?
After another block Taylor
stopped at an old craftsman-style house with a raised wraparound porch. In an
earlier life it had been beautiful, built probably in the mid-1930’s. The porch
was wide with thick stone columns at each corner and extended rafter beams that
supported a broad, low-slung roof. Now, though, the porch was starting to sag
and weeds filled the flowerbeds. Taylor stopped beside the corner column and
looked through the window before slipping in the back door. Olivia crouched
down and watched. The kinktail cat joined her as she observed, apparently
winning the war for the mouse since he still had possession of it. He settled
in next to Olivia to eat it, starting with the tender little mouse feet.
Olivia patted the cat on the head
and sent her attention back to the porch. Narrowing her eyes and concentrating,
she looked past the walls into the house and then relaxed to let the magic flow
through her and give her what she desired. The wood seemed to disappear and the
sight inside was visible to her as if in brilliant sunlight. Taylor paused
alone in the kitchen, listening. In the living room Olivia could see a couple
on the couch watching one of those cheap reality tv shows. The woman had overly
processed blond hair and he had his filthy sock feet on a coffee table that was
littered with junk, including long, brightly-colored fingernails the woman was
gluing on. The man heard Taylor come in and yelled into the kitchen.
“Get in here – where the hell
have you been?”
Taylor came just inside the
living room. “With some friends.”
“Horseshit. You don’t have
friends except those stupid street kids. Why do you do that anyway?”
Taylor stayed silent and he
answered himself.
“Probably all you can get, you’re
so goddamned dumb. Couldn’t even graduate high school.”
And whose
fault is that? Taylor clenched her jaw to prevent a retort.
“Why don’t you
go get a job? Oh, yeah…who’s going to hire a sorry stupid ass like you? You
couldn’t keep the last one. Be more like your sister. She gets good grades and
got into college – and as soon as she leaves next month your ass is out of here,
too. Get out and find your mother, wherever the hell she is.”
Taylor stared
at him. “As if you didn’t know – I’m sure you do.”
“I’d advise
you not to go around saying that, you little bitch!” His threat was low, dark.
Then he muttered: “I don’t know where she is.” He looked back at the
television.
“Do you mind?
I can’t hear my program.” Ms. Straw-for-Hair was now fanning her fingers to dry
the glue.
He snarled at
her. “Shut up.” While she looked mildly surprised he shouted toward the hallway
opposite where Taylor stood.
“Karen! Get in
here and clean the kitchen with your sister!” Apparently she didn’t appear fast
enough because he got up and left the room, returning with a petite girl whom
he held tightly by a handful of hair. She looked terrified and whimpered as he
jerked her across the room.
Taylor was immediately between
them grabbing his wrist, digging in her nails to try to make him let go. He
did, but only to use that hand to slap her, the momentum bouncing her against
the wall. She narrowed her eyes against the stinging tears, refusing to give
him the satisfaction and pulled Karen into the kitchen away from him. He
returned to the couch where the blonde sat in overt silence, still fanning her
nails but with a little less gusto.
Olivia shook her head. What a piece of work he is… She watched
Taylor comfort her sister then start to clean as they had been told. …and now there’s a sister to deal with, too.
In the kitchen Taylor smoldered.
“I hate him. I hate him so much.” The sister tried to look at Taylor’s cheek,
but she turned away.
“It’s okay.”
Karen hugged her. “Come with me
to school.”
“How? You have to live in the
dorm the first two years; I can’t afford anything on my own.”
“We’ll find something for you.”
“And what about Mom? I can’t
leave here yet.”
Karen was silent a moment. “Come
on, let’s finish the kitchen.” She started picking up dishes.
Meanwhile, kinktail finished his
mouse, putting the head under a bush for later, and came over to Olivia
purring. She scritched him under the chin while she watched Taylor and Karen
finish their cleaning and quietly pass back through the living room, careful
not to wake the man now sleeping on the couch. When they were both in bed she
let the picture in front of her fade until it was only the wraparound porch
again. Then standing up, she willed herself home and was instantly there,
leaving nothing behind her but a shimmer in the night air.
The Witches Trilogy Available @ Amazon
Here's the cover for Book 2
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